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Typos on Getting Started page

BUG Ticket (closed)

On the Getting Started[1] page, the paragraph under the Getting Lithium heading ends in the following sentence:

"If you've never completed that process before, sometimes its as simple as typing in 'ssh-keygen' in a console."

"its" should be changed to "it's", as it is being used as a contraction in this case.

The next sentence after the ssh-keygen output is:

"Once the public key has been created, copy and paste it's contents into the Ssh Keys section of your account settings at rad-dev.org."

"it's" should be changed to "its" as this is the possessive form, and "Ssh" should be "SSH".

The next sentence is:

"Now that your key has been set up, clone yourself a copy of Li3 inside of your webserver's document root:"

"inside of" should be changed to "inside".

After further code output, the next piece of text is:

"You'll be asked a password during this operation. Make sure to supply the same one you did when you created your SSH key."

"asked a password" should be "asked for a password" (or "prompted for a password" might be more accurate).

[1] http://rad-dev.org/lithium/wiki/guides/installation
on 09.05.10 reported by: pwaring owned by: nate

Updates

on 09.06.10 by pwaring
  • type was changed to bug
(fixed) on 09.08.10 by nate
  • owner was changed to nate
  • status was changed to closed
  • resolution was changed to fixed